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I like English. I started to learn English for ten years ago. But I can't speak English very well. I want to speak it very well. I'm interesting abroad. I want to trip a lot of places.
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11/11/2009

Essay 2-02b Most cute bears

Recently, I’ve collected Care Bear goods. For example, I have some dolls, and a pen case. I like to know about care bears. The reasons why I like it care bears have a lot of character each of them. Care bears look so cute, and I can get power by the care bears characters. So, I'm interesting about care bear's web site. I’ll introduce the sites about Care bears information, play games, and some videos.

One web site, the Care Bears write about care bears. For example, it writes about care bears' history, some characters, some Care bears live, and around the world of Care bears.

Care bears are set of characters created by American Greetings in 1981 for use on greeting card. After that the care bears broadcasted TV and movie. It made them famous character. However, care bears were disappeared middle of 1990. But, care bears were revived at 2001. Recently, care bears famous in Japan. In this way, we can know about history of care bears' in this site.

Care bears have deference character each of them. It expressed by picture of their stomach symbol. The symbols difference each of them too. For example, there character is vigor, ashamed, friendly, lovely, and so on. Care bears’ goods are one of defense for a lot of people. When people want to vigor, the character’s care bear give vigor to people. I think that care bears give you some powers.

Another web site, the Care Bears home of care bear, we can play game, and enjoy coloring, playing ball games, seeking games. We can enjoy the game with cute care bears. So I think that little children can enjoy those games. Not only children but also adults can enjoy the games.

We can watch some videos at this site, the Care Bears Videos. I think this video makes us can enjoy studying English.

Theses web sites, I can enjoy free time, and I can learn a lot of things about care bears. I think that care bears are deep character. Knowing care bears is interesting for me. When I want to know about care bears and when I want to learn English, I often search those sites. If you want to know about care bears, please check in those web sites. You will able to get a lot of information. When you know about care bears’ things, you will love care bears. (406 words)

citations:Wikipedia, Care bears

7/09/2009

Essay 1-03b: Treasure

We watched the movie whose title is Lilo and Stitch. I thought that this movie has various hearts. I think that heart is very important for us to live. When I watched the movie, I learned a few things. One is about guardianship. And, other is about traditional culture. This movie thought me having heart is important.

People have a lot of heart in own mind. For example, people have a family love, brotherly, friendly and so on. Then the movie has a guardianship. The purposes of the guardianships are saving family and Lilo’s future in this movie. Lilo’s sister, Nani, had to find a job to save family. I think that working is very important for us to live. If we don’t have work, we couldn’t get money, and we couldn’t live. So Nani have to get work to Lilo’s future.

Actually, I saw the woman who can't live with her daughter in the TV. She has to spend massive life with her husband. She was remarriage with her new husband, so her daughter didn't know new husband. Then the daughter lived in the institution. She was very sad to live not with her daughter. She wants to live with her daughter. I think that a lot of people who can't live with them children want to live together. However, condition is very severe.

If I have a child in the future, I want to teach about having heart is most important thngs. For example, we should have kinds and feelings to friends, parents, sibling, teachers and so on. Then the relationship is important for us to live. I am going to teach these things. So, I will cherish myrelationships.

Next is traditional culture. We have many cultures in our life. For example, we have foods cultures, clothes culture and house culture and so on. It is different each country in the earth. When I watched the movie, I learned Hawaii's traditional culture. Hawaii's cultures are dancing fula, Hawaiian music, Hawaiian juice and so on. These cultures are interested for me.

But, I have a pride of Japanese culture. I think that Japanese cultures are peculiar. For example, Japanese culture has Bon odori, Ennka,, and sushi and so on. These take root in our life. If we went to go abroad, we can experience about different culture. To experience different culture is important for us. We can know wide world.

This movie taught me a lot of things. These are important things to live. I think that even a child can understand this movie, so this movie taught them about hearts. Then, to know different culture is to learn own culture. We have to treasure them.(447 words)

6/24/2009

Essay 1-02b: University Life

Last writing class we spoke about some students like or unlike you do. I thought about a lot of things students like or unlike they do. I often think that I want to a like my friend’s, but I didn’t talk about it. However, I knew about it in the class. So I will introduce university life.

First, I usually come to school by train. So I have to get up early in the morning. I study a lot of things at KGU. For example, I learn about English, linguistics etc. It is hard for me to study, but I have a lot of things enjoy. For example, I talk with a lot of friends at rest time. It is good time for me. Then I work at KGU as an assistant. I teach a lot of students how to use computers. It is fruitful for me.

Next, I write about my friends’ university life. I don’t belong to a club, but a lot of my friends belong to a club. One friend belongs to a tennis club. She looks so hard. Because, she receive classes and she practice tennis after school. But she do her best. So, I think that she have a good time in a university life. Other friends belong to Youth club. They have a good time too.

Finally, I write about other students’ life of KGU. Some students live alone. They usually cook, clean and wash clothes by themselves but, they have to a lot of things by own. But, they have a lot of free time. So, they spend the time with friends or club members. For example, they spend time holding parties, driving a lot of places, talking about a lot of things. They have a good time at KGU.

A lot of students have precious time themselves university life. I think that people can spend memorial time at university of our life. Students can learn a lot of things in the university. Then I think that university life is important for us, because we can challenge a lot of things. We have to spend full time.(354 words)

4/20/2009

Introduction myself revision

Hello. How do you do? I introduce myself from now on. First, my name is Yumi. My first name was made by my father when I was born. My first name is Yumi written by kanji 祐美. My name’s origin that 祐 is help to people and so on, and 美 is beautiful. My birthday is in January, and I’m nineteen years old.


I’m from Gyokuto in Kumamoto. My hometown Gyokuto is a historical place.


My family members are my father, my mother and my brother. My father’s job is a policeman, and my mother’s job is to cook lunch for elderly people at an institution. My brother is one year older than me, and he is a student at Sojo University. He is majoring in architecture.


My favorite foods are cream puff and fried chicken. When my mother asks me “what do you want to eat for today’s dinner?” I always answers “fried chicken”. I like fried chicken all the more. I can’t eat eel, because I hate that it looks like snakes. Then I don’t like the dog days when we have to eat eels.


My hobby is to watch movies, to go shopping and to make cakes. I often do such things in my holiday. My specialty is to play the flute. A peg to play the flute is that I was member of the brass band club when I was in junior high school. My parents bought me a new flute when I was thirteen years old, because I was using the school’s old flute at the beginning. So the flute is my treasure. I don’t belong to such a club now, but I sometimes play the flute during the holidays.


I’m working part-time as a clerk in a supermarket and laundry. The office is near my house, it is so convenient for me. Besides, I will start part-time job as Teaching Assistant at Kumamoto Gakuen University next month. The part-time job is advantageous for me. First, I can spend time usefully. Second, I can learn how to teach students. I am in the teaching course, so it is useful for me. Third, I can get paid. Just kill three bird with one stone. I want to work at an airport or hotel in the future, so I am interested in the tourist industry. I’m interested in overseas since my childhood, and I want to come in contact with a lot of foreigner, so I want to work overseas.


Finally, I have a few questions for you. What do you do in holidays? Then, do you have any rules in your family? I want to know these things to stay with you. I’m looking forward to meet you.


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4/15/2009

Revisions

Dear Yusuke.
Thank you. I'm so happy read the coment. I will do my best.
Let's do our best.


Dear Takako.
Thank you. Really?? I supprised that you played the flute.
Sorry, I forgot movie's title. The movie was sad storry. But, I moved.
I didn' t see it yet. I want to watch it.

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