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- yumi
- I like English. I started to learn English for ten years ago. But I can't speak English very well. I want to speak it very well. I'm interesting abroad. I want to trip a lot of places.
6/09/2009
BR 1-09 : THREE BY THE SEA
I read the book which title is Three By The Sea. The reason why I choose this book, my friend read this book. And she introduced it to me. So, I read the book.The story's characters are Lolly, Spider, Sam whose are friend each other. And the other characters are dog, cat, rat and monster.This story that they making a story themselves. It makes only own. But, they connect a few story which they think the story. I think that it is very interesting. When I read this book, I thought that to make story is interesting things. Actually I made a story with my friends in elementary school days. And we enjoyed making it. The other things, we enjoy to play game. The game title is When, Who, Where, What doing. It is very interesting. To play game is more interesting not only alone but also a lot of people. We don’t know what the other person says, so the story is not connection. However I think that the point is to enjoy.After read this book, I wanted to make story with my friends too. (189 words)
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Hi Yumi,
This book review isn't largely your own words, is it? Why have you quoted so much dialog from the story?
Please review your mail (2009.06.11), (re-)read the Book Reviews page of the Writing Studio Wiki, and review all supporting documents (follow the links from the wiki). Then re-write this book review as necessary.
PS: If you want an A for Writing III, §1A, you'd better switch your blog over to English right away! Cheers, PB
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