Portfolios for Writting IV, Setion 1A

Student ID: 08102

Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A

0.0. OVERVIEW

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

1.0. ESSAYS

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
2-01a (2009.10.07)	Partial	2009.10.07	6	308	9	0	0	0
2-01b (2009.10.21)	Places I like	2009.10.21	6	364	0	0	0	0
2-02b (2009.11.18)	Most cute bears	2009.11.11	7	406	0	3	０	0
2-03a (2009.12.02)	Most important thing	2009.11.28	7	701	15	0	0	0
2-03b (2009.12.18/22)	Most important things	2009.12.16	9	929	1	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	40	3085	32	6	1	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics

M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Most Improved Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.

[Most important things]

• This essay is the most improvement than any other essays. For example this essay's structure is better than before essay. Then this essay has a few point of view, "I " and "we". So, I think that this essay is easy to read.
  
• This essay divide each gradually level. So, I felt current of time.
• I found that I didn't distinguish the words whether singular or plural clearly. So I improved those words.
  

2.0. COMMENTS

Showcase	Short titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Social Media and Social Networking Explained	2009.10.14	17	Impression
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	Language Learning stories	2009.12.09	39	Question Opinion
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Most important thing	2009.12.09	34	improvement
2.4. Most comments on:	Short titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Most important thing	2009.11.28	325	improvements, good points
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2009.12.16	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	929	I post on the blog
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Partial	2009.10.14	145	questions
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2009.10.14	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	60	on the comment

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• ... I located recent comments in a footer, because my blog's design can not locate in a sidebar, header. So, I located it in a footer.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• Through get some comments, I can get some opinion from reader. It is very benefit for me to study English, because reader tell me about some my mistakes.
  
• Through get some comments, I can know about other opinion which i don't have. Then I think that my view spread.
  

3.0. BOOK REVIEWS

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 2-01	The Old Woman Who Named Things	2009.08.14	236	0
BR 2-02	The Hare and the Tortoise	2009.08.17	230	0
BR 2-03	Ben and the Ghost	2009.08.20	189	0
BR 2-04	Little Witch Goes to School	2009.08.22	194	0
BR 2-05	Pinocchio	2009.09.21	120	0
BR 2-06	Stories of Dolls	2009.10.07	46	0
BR 2-07	Stories of Santa	2009.10.14	201	0
BR 2-08	Save Floppy	2009.10.26	102	0
BR 2-09	Houses Then and Now	2009.10.30	148	1
BR 2-10	Taxtation	2009.11.04	103	0
BR 2-11	Three Billy-Goats	2009.11.10	133	0
BR 2-12	BUIRDING THE PYRAMIDS	2009.11.17	195	0
BR 2-13	MY BUSHFIRE DIARY	2009.11.24	198	0
BR 2-14	GOVERNMENT IN AUSTRALIA	2010.01.11	112	0
BR 2-15	Food from the World	2010.01.11	87	0
BR 2-16
BR 2-17
BR 2-18
---	---	Totals:	2294	1

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

Houses Then and Now

• I think that this book review is best than any other book reviews, because it written about my opinion.
• A lot of information which I got by this book are written in this book review.
  

4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	√
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	√
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	√
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?		√
4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar?		√
4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	√
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	√
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	√
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	√
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	√
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	√
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	√
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 30 other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. 　　　 America (8) Books (27) diary (25) drafts (3) essay prep. (3) essays (14) favorites (5) graphic (26) links (4) media (3) quickposts (11) reviews (25) revisions (5) speaking (5) trip (8) websites (3)	---	---
4.3. Links and media	---	---
4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics?	√
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	√
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? 27 posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	√
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? 2 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		√
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? 　　　　　　 0 posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... ...	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. Display. I listed a lot of photos to read by people.
2. Formatting. I care that use many expression.
3. Layout. I tried easy to see layout.

5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).

• It was little difficult for me to do class work, so I often asked my friends what should I do on the time.
• I think that homework was little many for me. Writing class' homework use computer, so I need a lot of time. So, I felt so that.
• I think that this portfolio is very nice, because I can look over my document.
  

6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS

• To include some graphics is one of important thing.
• I think that people have to write this blog regularly, otherwise people will worry.
• I think that you should write a lot of things you did.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
   
4. The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.

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Portfolio for Writing III

Student ID: 08102

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	Introduction myself	2009/04/08	4	456	0	0	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)	Introduction myself revision	2009/04/20	7	454	8	0	0	0
(1-01c)
1-02a (2009.06.01)	University Life	2009/05/30	5	363	0	0	0	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	University Life	2009/06/24	5	354	3	0	0	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	Treasure	2009/06/25	6	390	0	0	0	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Treasure	2009/07/09	7	447	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	34	2464	11	0	0	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• Essay 1-02b: University Life: I felt this essay is best of my essay in this semister. I have a few reason why I choose this essay. One is that I think this essay writtrn about my opinion. For example this essay written in my life, students life, and so on. The other reason that I thought a lot of things about students life. I could tell other parson a lot of things' information, so this essay is best essay for me.
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Portfolio for Writing III (template)	2009/07/18	32words	I had a question.
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	Essay 1-02a: My University Life	2009/07/01	36 words	I advised her about information. Then I praised her blog.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Essay 1-02b: University Life	2009/06/24	60 words	I was happy, because she could my eaasy's mean.
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Introduction myself revision	2009/04/20	297 words	They advised me about how to write better. Then they have a few questions.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2009/07/09	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	15 words	I answerd what kind of movie I like.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Sport festival	2009/05/31	17words	She write about photo.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2009/07/15	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	22words	To eat box lunch is delicious for me too.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• I indicate at the footer. It is because I want to watch a lot of people the comments, so I indicate at the footer. Actually I wanted put sidebar, but I couldn't this template.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• I could know about my habit to write the sentence.
  

• The advice was very benefit for me.
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	The ClumsyPrince	2009/04/14	228	1
BR 1-02	The princess who wouldn't get married	2009/04/19	259	0
BR 1-03	The Time Machine	2009/04/23	141	2
BR 1-04	STUART LITTLE	2009/04/30	263	0
BR 1-05	Bears ODD	2009/05/08	131	1
BR 1-06	Mr. Putter and Tabby Walk the Dog	2009/05/17	129	0
BR 1-07	Oriver and Amanda and the big snow	2009/05/24	167	0
BR 1-08	The Gingerbread Man	2009/05/30	193	0
BR 1-09	THREE BY THE SEA	2009/06/09	189	2
BR 1-10	Tigger Comes to the Forest	2009/06/16	175	0
BR 1-11	FLUFFY GOES APPLE PICKING	2009/06/21	188	1
BR 1-12	Young Cam Jansen	2009/06/29	141	0
BR 1-13	Harry Takes a Bath	2009/07/07	147	0
BR 1-14	A KISS FOR LITTLE BEAR	2009/07/11	154	0
---	---	Totals:	2505	7

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• BR 1-09 : THREE BY THE SEA

  The reason why I choose this book review is that I think it expressed my opinion. Then I wrote about simply story. I think it is best.
  

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 10 other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. Books (14) brainstorms (1) essay prep (1) essays (7) free-writing (1) life (1) links (3) media (3) movies (2) portfolios (1) quickposts (10) reviews (14) revisions (4) university (1) writing (1)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? 11 posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? １ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ３ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ...I posted media of movie which title is Yomei ikkagetu no hanayome. ...I posted media of movie which title is Lilo and Stitch. ...I posted media of my university.	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... http://disney.go.com/disneyvideos/animatedfilms/liloandstitch2/ ... http://www.hanayome-movie.jp/index.html ...http://www.kumagaku.ac.jp/english/index.html	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...I have enhance my typing speed of PC. I think I became useing a lot of options of computer.

2. ...I wrote a lot of things in this blog. Then I have enhance my sentence skills.

3. ...I could paste some pictures to explain my diary. Then I could write my opinion.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...I think this portfolio is very profound. I could review of my blog with this portfolio.

• ...I could think sentence of English at the a lot of place. For example, I thought sentence at train. I always thinking this blog.

• ...I was happy when I over 10,000 words. I think goal is very important.

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...My friends writing blog has a lot of pictures. I think to paste a lot of pictures is interested to reader.

• ...I wanted to cute my blog. Then I think I should have devised more.

• ...Attaining goal was very hard for me, so please make schedule.

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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License:

This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).