I read the book that title is “A Kiss for Little Bear”. The reason why I choose this book is that I am interested about this title. For example, I think why kiss for little bear. I can understand this title when I finished read this book.
The bear wrote a picture, and he want to look for him grand mother. But, he can not go to grand mother’s house, so he asked hen to bring the picture to him grand mother. The hen passes grand mother the picture. Then the grand mother asked hen to kiss for little bear. But, the hen on the back way to little bear passes the kiss for the other animal. However the hen brings the kiss for little bear.
When I read this book, I wonder to next page. This book is interesting for me. Please read this book. I think important things have to do own. (154 words)
自己紹介
- yumi
- I like English. I started to learn English for ten years ago. But I can't speak English very well. I want to speak it very well. I'm interesting abroad. I want to trip a lot of places.
7/11/2009
7/09/2009
Essay 1-03b: Treasure
We watched the movie whose title is Lilo and Stitch. I thought that this movie has various hearts. I think that heart is very important for us to live. When I watched the movie, I learned a few things. One is about guardianship. And, other is about traditional culture. This movie thought me having heart is important.
People have a lot of heart in own mind. For example, people have a family love, brotherly, friendly and so on. Then the movie has a guardianship. The purposes of the guardianships are saving family and Lilo’s future in this movie. Lilo’s sister, Nani, had to find a job to save family. I think that working is very important for us to live. If we don’t have work, we couldn’t get money, and we couldn’t live. So Nani have to get work to Lilo’s future.
Actually, I saw the woman who can't live with her daughter in the TV. She has to spend massive life with her husband. She was remarriage with her new husband, so her daughter didn't know new husband. Then the daughter lived in the institution. She was very sad to live not with her daughter. She wants to live with her daughter. I think that a lot of people who can't live with them children want to live together. However, condition is very severe.
If I have a child in the future, I want to teach about having heart is most important thngs. For example, we should have kinds and feelings to friends, parents, sibling, teachers and so on. Then the relationship is important for us to live. I am going to teach these things. So, I will cherish myrelationships.
Next is traditional culture. We have many cultures in our life. For example, we have foods cultures, clothes culture and house culture and so on. It is different each country in the earth. When I watched the movie, I learned Hawaii's traditional culture. Hawaii's cultures are dancing fula, Hawaiian music, Hawaiian juice and so on. These cultures are interested for me.
But, I have a pride of Japanese culture. I think that Japanese cultures are peculiar. For example, Japanese culture has Bon odori, Ennka,, and sushi and so on. These take root in our life. If we went to go abroad, we can experience about different culture. To experience different culture is important for us. We can know wide world.
This movie taught me a lot of things. These are important things to live. I think that even a child can understand this movie, so this movie taught them about hearts. Then, to know different culture is to learn own culture. We have to treasure them.(447 words)
People have a lot of heart in own mind. For example, people have a family love, brotherly, friendly and so on. Then the movie has a guardianship. The purposes of the guardianships are saving family and Lilo’s future in this movie. Lilo’s sister, Nani, had to find a job to save family. I think that working is very important for us to live. If we don’t have work, we couldn’t get money, and we couldn’t live. So Nani have to get work to Lilo’s future.
Actually, I saw the woman who can't live with her daughter in the TV. She has to spend massive life with her husband. She was remarriage with her new husband, so her daughter didn't know new husband. Then the daughter lived in the institution. She was very sad to live not with her daughter. She wants to live with her daughter. I think that a lot of people who can't live with them children want to live together. However, condition is very severe.
If I have a child in the future, I want to teach about having heart is most important thngs. For example, we should have kinds and feelings to friends, parents, sibling, teachers and so on. Then the relationship is important for us to live. I am going to teach these things. So, I will cherish myrelationships.
Next is traditional culture. We have many cultures in our life. For example, we have foods cultures, clothes culture and house culture and so on. It is different each country in the earth. When I watched the movie, I learned Hawaii's traditional culture. Hawaii's cultures are dancing fula, Hawaiian music, Hawaiian juice and so on. These cultures are interested for me.
But, I have a pride of Japanese culture. I think that Japanese cultures are peculiar. For example, Japanese culture has Bon odori, Ennka,, and sushi and so on. These take root in our life. If we went to go abroad, we can experience about different culture. To experience different culture is important for us. We can know wide world.
This movie taught me a lot of things. These are important things to live. I think that even a child can understand this movie, so this movie taught them about hearts. Then, to know different culture is to learn own culture. We have to treasure them.(447 words)
7/08/2009
Portfolio for Writing III
Student ID: 08102
Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1A OR 1C
[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
1-01a (2009.04.08) | Introduction myself | 2009/04/08 | 4 | 456 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-01b (2009.04.20) | Introduction myself revision | 2009/04/20 | 7 | 454 | 8 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
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1-02a (2009.06.01) | University Life | 2009/05/30 | 5 | 363 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-02b (2009.07.06) | University Life | 2009/06/24 | 5 | 354 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
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1-03a (2009.06.29) | Treasure | 2009/06/25 | 6 | 390 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
1-03b (2009.07.13) | Treasure |
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Totals | --- | --- | 34 | 2464 | 11 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
Essay 1-02b: University Life: I felt this essay is best of my essay in this semister. I have a few reason why I choose this essay. One is that I think this essay writtrn about my opinion. For example this essay written in my life, students life, and so on. The other reason that I thought a lot of things about students life. I could tell other parson a lot of things' information, so this essay is best essay for me.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | 2009/07/18 |
| I had a question. | |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Essay 1-02a: My University Life |
| 36 words |
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2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Essay 1-02b: University Life |
| 60 words |
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2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Introduction myself revision |
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| They advised me about how to write better. Then they have a few questions. |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- |
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- |
| I answerd what kind of movie I like. |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Sport festival | 2009/05/31 | 17words | She write about photo. |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 2009/07/15 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 22words | To eat box lunch is delicious for me too. |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.
I indicate at the footer. It is because I want to watch a lot of people the comments, so I indicate at the footer. Actually I wanted put sidebar, but I couldn't this template.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I could know about my habit to write the sentence.
The advice was very benefit for me.
3.0. Book Reviews
3.1. Showcase | Short titles | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 1-01 | The ClumsyPrince | 2009/04/14 | 228 | 1 |
BR 1-02 | The princess who wouldn't get married | 2009/04/19 | 259 | 0 |
BR 1-03 | The Time Machine | 2009/04/23 | 141 | 2 |
BR 1-04 | STUART LITTLE | 2009/04/30 | 263 | 0 |
BR 1-05 | Bears ODD | 2009/05/08 | 131 | 1 |
BR 1-06 | Mr. Putter and Tabby Walk the Dog | 2009/05/17 | 129 | 0 |
BR 1-07 | Oriver and Amanda and the big snow | 2009/05/24 | 167 | 0 |
BR 1-08 | The Gingerbread Man | 2009/05/30 | 193 | 0 |
BR 1-09 | THREE BY THE SEA | 2009/06/09 | 189 | 2 |
BR 1-10 | Tigger Comes to the Forest | 2009/06/16 | 175 | 0 |
BR 1-11 | FLUFFY GOES APPLE PICKING | 2009/06/21 | 188 | 1 |
BR 1-12 | Young Cam Jansen | 2009/06/29 | 141 | 0 |
BR 1-13 | Harry Takes a Bath | 2009/07/07 | 147 | 0 |
BR 1-14 | A KISS FOR LITTLE BEAR | 2009/07/11 | 154 | 0 |
--- | --- | Totals: | 2505 | 7 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
BR 1-09 : THREE BY THE SEA
The reason why I choose this book review is that I think it expressed my opinion. Then I wrote about simply story. I think it is best.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? |
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4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? |
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4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? |
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4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? |
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4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.
...I have enhance my typing speed of PC. I think I became useing a lot of options of computer.
...I wrote a lot of things in this blog. Then I have enhance my sentence skills.
...I could paste some pictures to explain my diary. Then I could write my opinion.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).
...I think this portfolio is very profound. I could review of my blog with this portfolio.
...I could think sentence of English at the a lot of place. For example, I thought sentence at train. I always thinking this blog.
...I was happy when I over 10,000 words. I think goal is very important.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
...My friends writing blog has a lot of pictures. I think to paste a lot of pictures is interested to reader.
...I wanted to cute my blog. Then I think I should have devised more.
...Attaining goal was very hard for me, so please make schedule.
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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).
Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.
The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).
7/07/2009
BR 1-13: Harry Takes a Bath
I read the book which title is "Harry Takes a Bath". The reason why I choose this book is I was interested about the picture. Then I care about story, so I rend this book from library. The story is how to take a bath. The character's hippopotamus takes a bath. And he introduce about it. I read this book, I could know about difference of how to take a bath between Japan and overseas. Then I know about difference of bath room. In Japan, we can take shower and put in the bath tub. But, in overseas, we can only take shower. I will go to NZ in this summer vacation. I hear that we have to take a shower only ten minuets. I take a bath about thirty minutes, so I have to practice to take a bath on time. I will do my best. (147 words)
7/05/2009
Yakiniku party
Yesterday, I joined to the Yakiniku party. Yakiniku party held at Daikokuten. I enjoyed eating Yakiniku with assistant members. We rendezvoused in front of Daiey at six forty-five. But, a lot of people are in there. So, I couldn’t meet other persons. A few minuets later, I could meet my senior. After that we went to Daikokuten. We ate a lot of meats and vegetables etc. We enjoyed to eat and to talk.
Then we enjoyed to make face by vegetables. Please look this picture. It looks delicious. Hair made by mushroom, ear made by wing, eye made by eggplant and mushroom, nose and mouth made by green pepper, and eyebrow made by pumpkin. When we make this face, we were crush. So, we forgot return these. Then these were burnt. But, we could spend enjoyed time.
After that we went to Karaoke. We didn’t have
enough time to sing, because we have to ride on the train. So, we enjoyed an hour to sing. We sung a lot of music. But, the time pass soon, so we have to came back home. I ride on the train about eleven o’clock. Yesterday, I had a very good time. (198 words) 7/02/2009
Vacation plans
I am going to go to NZ this summer vacation. Actually, I was going to go to America, but I can not to go there. However I can change the course to NZ from America. So I am looking forward to go there. I none too know about NZ, so I have to study about NZ. At there I stay at host family's home. I want to cooking Japanese food to host family. So I want to study about how to cook Japanese food. I had never been to overseas, so I worried go there. I will do my best at there. (103 words)
About blogging
I usually write about my life in my blog. It is very enjoy for me to write daily. I sometimes took a picture, and I paste the photo in the blog. For example, I take some friend's pictures or interesting things' picture. When I watched the photo in my blog, I remember the day. I sometimes contribution about book which I read. I like to watch other person's blog. It is very useful for me. I have to write about nine hundred letters in my blog. So I will do my best.
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